Lifted
This place is so quiet and there are barely
any customers here. I don’t understand how this place survived. I don’t
understand how I survived working here. Maybe because I’m used to the smell of
the stale, empty air that has been filled this place for years.
20 minutes of drowning in boredom, the
bell that was hung at the door rang my eardrums and I quickly readjust my
posture after standing like a zombie for almost 20 minutes. The customer is a
girl.
There is
something about this girl that makes me stare at her and trying to not make it
too obvious. Maybe because I have been staring at my foot for almost an hour
and my eyes could literally starts to peel itself from me for not having a
life.
But there is no doubt the girl is pretty. Not
the Sharpay Evans kind of pretty but the sweet –sundress Gabriella kind of
pretty. But the girl is not wearing a sundress, she’s wearing an oversized
flannel and black jeans. The colour of her socks doesn’t match her flannel at
all. The socks are these very dark green colour while her flannel was dark
blue. At least her shoes matched the flannel. Those are blue loafers. She has a
little blond hidden in her chestnut hair. Maybe was a blonde when she was
young. Some people are completely blonde when they were young and become a
brunette as they grow older.
She’s holding two
thick books in her right hand and also a schoolbag. She must be quite a reader.
I was trying to
catch a glimpse of the books she was carrying but I tear my gaze away from her
as quick as I could when she starts to walk to me slowly. She glares at some
other snacks while she walks.
When she finally
arrive at the counter and place her choices of food and drinks, she put the
books that she was holding on the counter and reach her backpack to retrieve
her purse. I take my chance to at least catch the title of the book and start
to scan her things before packing it into a plastic bag. She likes sci-fi, I
assume.
‘16 dollars and
30 cents,’ I said.
She hands me $20
and in a light voice she said, ‘Here you go.’ She smiled at me after she takes
her packed stuff with her and thanked me.
‘You know, it’s
rude to stare at people like that,’ she said suddenly. I shot my head at her
with wide eyes but she’s not looking at me with those bright hazel eyes,
instead she was shoving her purse into her backpack and sling it back to her
shoulders.
My eyes are still
wide because I’m still shock by what she said earlier when she looks directly
at my eyes and smiles at me like there is something funny on my face.
She says a quick
thanks and leaves. She’s still smiling after she left the shop and I stare at
her through the display window until she’s gone. My heart is still racing and
the adrenaline keeps running through my veins.
And I swore for a
minute there, her eyes shined when she smiles and I hope to see that shine
again.
End
Comments
It also features a simple concept of a typical meeting of a romance novel,
By the description it seems very obvious that the MC is going to get noticed,
And good job on hazing the intention behind the girls smile,
But if I had to comment , it would be that the choice of words seems a little weird.
Nevertheless it's okay.